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            EXT. LOADING DOCK PARKING LOT - LATER

            Josh, Mary, and Julian are standing around in the parking lot
            talking, jingling keys.

            Behind them, two BAR GUYS, blue collar, five-o'clock shadows
            and lots of denim, are coming out of the bar.

                                JULIAN
                      ...and I just left.

                                MARY
                      Just left?

                                JULIAN
                      Right. Bye.

                                MARY
                      What about your stuff?

                                JULIAN
                      I climbed in through the window
                      afterwards and got it. Whatever. Fuck
                      him, you know?

                                MARY
                      I guess, but wow.

                                JOSH
                      Wow. That's --

            One of the bar guys from behind have taken notice of Mary.
            The other one keeps walking to his car.

                                BAR GUY
                      Hey, you need a ride?

            Josh looks around to see if the Bar Guy is taking to someone
            else. Mary and Julian look right at the Bar Guy.

                                JULIAN
                      What's that?

                                BAR GUY
                      I wasn't talking to you, was I? You got
                      something to say to me?

                                JULIAN
                      Not in those pants man.

            Julian turns back to our conversation. The Bar Guy's friend,
            in his car now, leans on the horn.

                                BAR GUY #2
                      Come on, dickhead!

            The bar guy can't do all this at once, and must retreat to
            his friends car. The bar guys leave.

            Julian lights a cigarette. Josh stares at the car as it
            leaves. He's blown away.

            A beat.

                                MARY
                      So, it's good to see you!

                                JULIAN
                      Likewise.

                                MARY
                          (to Josh)
                      Oh, my car!

            Josh turns, as if to check for Mary's car.

                                JOSH
                      Yeah... No, I'll take you to your car.

                                MARY
                      No, that's so out of your way.

                                JULIAN
                      Where's your car?

                                MARY
                      At the school. Which way are you going?

            Julian turns to see if Mary's car is behind him.

                                JULIAN
                      Where's the school? On Veterans? (with
                      The Ladies Man's accent) yeah, um, thas a
                      little out of my way, and um...

                                JOSH
                      No, it's fine, I can take you. I can take
                      her.

                                JULIAN
                      Super.

                                MARY
                      OK --

            INT. JOSH'S TRUCK - MOMENTS LATER

            Josh is taking Mary to her car.

                                JOSH
                      What time do you work tomorrow?

                                MARY
                      Don't. Thanksgiving.

                                JOSH
                      Right. Sorry. Well, are you gonna... What
                      are you doing then?

                                MARY
                      Hmm.

            They arrive at the school.

                                JOSH
                      Huh?

                                MARY
                      What?

                                JOSH
                      Oh, nothing, I was... What are you gonna
                      do tomorrow?

                                MARY
                      I don't know. I'll call you, kay? Bye.
                      Thanks.

                                JOSH
                      Yeah, it's no... I'm gonna be slammed at
                      the farm anyway, so... OK... Drive safe.

            Josh waits for Mary to get into her car. 

            Mary tries to wave him on. Josh waves back, continues to
            wait. She leaves.

            Josh watches her go, looks down to see that she has left the
            flowers he bought her on the seat.

            INT. JOSH'S HOUSE - LATER

            Josh is at the kitchen sink. He trims the flowers
            individually under running water, fills a vase, arranges the
            flowers on the dining room table. He takes the flowers in for
            a beat.

            In the bathroom, Josh starts the shower.

            Outside, it has started to snow.

            INT. FRANCHISE COFFEE HOUSE - DAY

            It is snowing outside. Mary is sitting at a table, paying her
            bills. She is having trouble paying attention. Lots to look
            at.

            An attractive YOUNG PROFESSIONAL sits down across from her,
            goes through the process of setting up his computer, pulling
            out his work, etc.

            They exchange glances three or four times. 

            A beat.

                                YOUNG PROFESSIONAL
                      So...?

            Mary looks up.

            Young professional wasn't ready for this. He stalls.

                                YOUNG PROFESSIONAL (CONT'D)
                      I'm sorry.

                                MARY
                      No. Is... I'm Mary.

                                YOUNG PROFESSIONAL
                      Hi. I'm Josh.

                                MARY
                      You're kidding.

                                YOUNG PROFESSIONAL
                      No, I'm really Josh. Is that...?

                                MARY
                      No, it's strange. It's really strange.
                      I'm sorry... Sorry.

            Mary quickly packs up her stuff and leaves. The young
            professional looks on, a bit confused. After Mary leaves, his
            cell phone rings. He's back into his element.

            INT. TAKEOUT FOOD PLACE - MOMENTS LATER

            This is a Boston Market. Mary enters and approaches the
            counter. The TAKEOUT FOOD EMPLOYEE looks less than thrilled
            to be here on Thanksgiving. 

                                MARY
                      Hi.

                                TAKEOUT FOOD EMPLOYEE
                      Hi.

                                MARY
                      Sucks to be here today, huh?

            Takeout Food Employee smiles.

                                MARY (CONT'D)
                      Yeah... So, do you have like,
                      Thanksgiving?

            EXT. JOSHUA'S TREES CHRISTMAS TREE FARM - EVENING

            Josh is harvesting the trees for Christmas. There are FARM
            HANDS helping him. He is felling trees, loading them on a BIG
            FLATBED TRUCK.

            The trees are being taken off the flatbed truck and loaded
            into a baler, which ties them with twine.

            The baled trees are loaded onto more trucks, headed out of
            the farm.

            Mary pulls into the lot. Josh notices her and comes over.
            Mary is pulling the bags of food and a bottle of wine out of
            her car.

                                MARY
                      Happy Thanksgiving! Surprise!

                                JOSH
                      Wow. Hey. What are you... Wow. Did you
                      cook all this?

                                MARY
                          (in a British accent)
                      Don't be daft.

                                JOSH
                      Right, sorry... Well it looks good! You
                      look better.

            Josh and Mary kiss.

            INT. POLE BARN - MOMENTS LATER

            Josh and Mary are sitting at a bench on the side of the barn.
            The barn is full of trees, some with their lights on. Neither
            of them is talking, as their mouths are full.

            Josh takes a sip of wine, swallows, wipes his mouth and looks
            at Mary.

            Mary stops chewing and looks at Josh.

                                MARY
                          (with a mouth full of food)
                      What?

                                JOSH
                      Do you want to be with me?

            Mary swallows.

                                MARY
                      I am with you.

                                JOSH
                      Right, no, I mean like... Do you want to
                      BE with me?

                                MARY
                      I know what you meant. I am with you.

                                JOSH
                      Oh. OK.

            Josh can't help smiling. He goes back to eating.

            INT. PHARMACY - AFTERNOON

            Julian is waiting in the pharmacy's pseudo-lounge for a
            prescription to be filled. He is using the blood pressure
            checking machine. He notices Josh, across the lobby looking
            at humidifiers.

                                JULIAN
                      You got a lot of nerve showing up here.

            Josh turns, not sure if he's being talked to.

                                JOSH
                      Oh, hey man! What are you doing? You
                      don't have...

            Josh nods to the machine that Julian has his arm in.

                                JULIAN
                      Yeah, 'fraid so. Just a matter of time
                      now.

                                JOSH
                      (getting the joke) right, right. That's
                      too bad. So anyway, how you been?

                                JULIAN
                      Good, good. Getting lots of rest,
                      catching up on Dallas. Hey, you don't
                      know who shot JR, do you?

                                JOSH
                      Ah, no, sorry.

                                PHARMACIST
                          (loudspeaker)
                      Prescription for Taylor?

                                JULIAN
                      That's cool. What are you doing right
                      now?

                                JOSH
                      Oh, I was looking at getting... But not
                      really anything. Nothing. You?

                                PHARMACIST
                      Taylor, your prescription is ready.

                                JULIAN
                          (to Pharmacist)
                      YES! Thank you!

            INT. LOADING DOCK - LATER

            Josh and Julian are having drinks, talking. There's almost
            nobody there.

                                JOSH
                      So, I mean, it's weird I think, or people
                      think, but not really any stranger than
                      other people's things.

                                JULIAN
                      Yeah, I don't think it's that weird at
                      all. You only get like a month for
                      Christmas as it is, that's not nearly
                      enough. Plus that's your job. How many
                      people are that passionate about their
                      jobs? 

                                JOSH
                      Yeah, yeah. I don't know. It works for
                      me.

                                JULIAN
                      So, do you sell all of the trees come
                      christmas? Do you have a lot?

                                JOSH
                      Well, my grandpa used to run a lot. That
                      was my first job, pretty much my only
                      job, helping him. Now what I do, is I
                      wholesale the trees to people, and then
                      they run their own lots. Most of the
                      county ends up with my trees.

                                JULIAN
                      Your Grandpa dead now?

                                JOSH
                      Yeah, he died about three years ago. He
                      was actually the first person over sixty
                      to die on a roller coaster in the US.

                                JULIAN
                      No shit? Where?

                                JOSH
                      In Ohio, at Screaming Peaks. It wasn't
                      their fault. There's this ride where you
                      stand up I guess --

                                JULIAN
                      The Whirling Dervish.

                                JOSH
                      Right, the Whirling Dervish. I've never
                      been, so... So anyway, I guess it really
                      bangs your head around, and you have the
                      restraints all around you? Is that right?

                                JULIAN
                      I've never been on it.

                                JOSH
                      Oh, well I guess your head sort of bangs
                      back and forth, which, for most people is
                      kind of painful. But, so what happened
                      was that this banging around knocked
                      something loose from his carotid artery,
                      which is right here?

            Josh points to his neck. Julian feels the same spot on his
            neck.

                                JULIAN
                      OK.

                                JOSH
                      So, and then when the ride was over, he
                      was in the middle of a stroke. I guess
                      the people were waiting for him to move,
                      and then when he didn't they figured out,
                      you know, that something was wrong. So, I
                      guess that never happened before, or
                      maybe just not to someone his age, but
                      now I guess there's extra padding, so...

                                JULIAN
                      Jesus. That's... Jesus. Was anyone with
                      him? 

                                JOSH
                      No, he was alone. He would take a trip
                      every fall, on the train. He was really
                      into riding the train, but he always
                      insisted on going alone. He was pretty
                      cool. Even at his age, he pretty much
                      made the rest of the family look pretty
                      boring.

                                JULIAN
                      Damn. So you got the farm?

                                JOSH
                      Yep, he left that to me.

                                JULIAN
                      What about your parents?

                                JOSH
                      They died... They've been dead for a
                      while.

            A beat.

                                JULIAN
                      OK. You want another shot? Jack?

                                JOSH
                      Ah, sure... Yeah.

                                JULIAN
                      Good man. I'll be right back.

            Julian gets up, orders shots, and leaves the bar.

            Josh watches, looks around.

            Julian returns with his guitar case, leaves it at the table,
            leaves again, returns with two shots of whiskey.

            Julian gives Josh a shot, raises his glass.

                                JULIAN (CONT'D)
                      To your Grandpa. What's his name?

                                JOSH
                      Marvin.

                                JULIAN
                      To Marvin.

            Josh nods and they do the shot. Julian gets his guitar out,
            tunes it.

                                JULIAN (CONT'D)
                      Can you sing?

                                JOSH
                      Well, I mean, not like great.

                                JULIAN
                      You want to play a song?

                                JOSH
                      Yeah, I'm not really --

                                JULIAN
                      Yeah you are.

            Julian gets up and orders two more shots, brings them to the
            table, raises his glass.

                                JULIAN (CONT'D)
                      To caring less.

                                JOSH
                      Right.

            They do the shot.

                                JULIAN
                      Right. Come on.

            Julian walks on stage, Josh follows, unsure.

                                JULIAN (CONT'D)
                          (to the bartender)
                      Ryan?

            RYAN, the bartender, holds his hand up to say "whatever".
            Julian starts to play a soft acoustic ballad.

                                JULIAN (CONT'D)
                      You know this?

                                JOSH
                      I love this song.

                                JULIAN
                      I know you do, honey.

            Julian sings and plays guitar with Josh helping on the
            chorus.

            INT. JOSH'S TRUCK - LATER

            Josh is dropping Julian off at his car. They're sharing a
            beer. It is snowing hard.

                                JOSH
                      I mean, and that bothers me, sometimes. I
                      sometimes think I should be moving more,
                      or like doing more things, or whatever.
                      But I honestly do like my life, I don't
                      feel like I'm really missing anything.

                                JULIAN
                      Hey, if that works for you. Some people
                      need more, some less --

                                JOSH
                      Right. It's something about what will
                      happen, like what's coming. I spend so
                      much time thinking I'm ambitious, you
                      know? But then someone will ask me how
                      things are going, or what have you been
                      up to, and I basically just have the same
                      things to tell them. Oh, you know, same
                      old thing. Just doing my thing. And like,
                      I don't really know all that many people,
                      which is a thing that I - but like they
                      all seem to be moving forward, or even
                      backwards, but I don't really get that
                      about myself. But I mean, I'm fine.
                      I'm not like all that concerned with it,
                      which is maybe the problem, you know,
                      like these rising and setting levels of
                      interest in my life. But then, and this
                      is a whole other thing, which is I guess
                      tied to the idea of what's coming, but
                      it's this feeling that someone is going
                      to betray me. Which can't be right, or
                      even if it is, what good am I doing
                      worrying about it? But... I don't know.
                      Sorry.

                                JULIAN
                      You're a good guy, Josh. You deserve good
                      things. You might get them, maybe not,
                      but you should remember that.

                                JOSH
                      Right... Thanks man.

                                JULIAN
                      No sweat. Let's hang out this week, bring
                      Mary along.

                                JOSH
                      OK, sounds good. Drive safe.

                                JULIAN
                      No.

            Julian shuts the door, gets into his car, lights a cigarette,
            peels out in the snow.

                                JOSH
                      Mary.

            INT. PHONE BOOTH/MARY'S HOUSE - MOMENTS LATER - INTERCUT

            Josh is calling Mary. Four rings, then she picks up.

                                MARY
                          (sleepy)
                      Hello.

                                JOSH
                          (whispering)
                      Hey. Hi. Are you sleeping?

                                MARY
                      Hello?

                                JOSH
                      Hey. Can you hear me?

                                MARY
                      What are you doing?

                                JOSH
                      I'm uh, I went out for drink, or some
                      drinks, how are you? 

                                MARY
                      I'm sleeping, I'm tired.

                                JOSH
                      Yeah, sorry. Sorry about that. So, what
                      are you doing?

            Call waiting beeps.

                                MARY
                          (sighs)
                      Jesus Christ. Hang on.

            Mary tries to click over.

                                MARY (CONT'D)
                          (groggy)
                      Hello?

                                JOSH
                      Hey, Hi.

                                MARY
                      Hello?

                                JOSH
                      Hi, it's me still.

                                MARY
                      Jesus Christ. Hold on.

            Mary clicks over. Josh waits, looking around. It takes a long
            time. Finally, Mary clicks back over.

                                MARY (CONT'D)
                          (awake now)
                      Josh? Hello?

                                JOSH
                      Hey, yeah, hi.

                                MARY
                      Hi. What's up? What are you doing?

                                JOSH
                      Um, nothing. I was gonna see if you, what
                      are you doing?

                                MARY
                      I'm really tired, I'm sleeping. OK I'm
                      gonna sleep.

                                JOSH
                      Oh, alright. Who was on the other line?

                                MARY
                      Call me tomorrow.

            Mary hangs up.

                                JOSH
                      Mary?

            EXT. LIQUOR STORE - NIGHT

            This is your standard locally owned liquor store. It is still
            snowing hard. Julian pulls up outside the store just as the
            neon "OPEN" sign goes out. The LIQUOR STORE GUY, mid thirties
            and scruffy, is locking the glass front doors, just as Julian
            reaches them.

                                LIQUOR STORE GUY
                      Closed.

                                JULIAN
                      No, come on, man! All I need is
                      cigarettes.

                                LIQUOR STORE GUY
                      No, we're fucking closed. Go Away.

                                JULIAN
                      What did you say? Just fucking let me in,
                      dude, I just need smokes. Don't be a
                      fucking prick.

                                LIQUOR STORE GUY
                      HEY! I said we're fucking closed! Now
                      fuck off.

            Julian pounds the door handles.

                                JULIAN
                      Alright.

            Julian walks off, out of the frame. The Liquor Store Guy
            watches him go, and then steps backwards quickly. Julian
            comes back into frame, carrying a heavy waist-high DOORSTOP
            ASHTRAY. Julian throws the ashtray at the doors. The doors
            shatter and the Liquor Store Guy falls down, cowering on the
            floor. Julian walks up to the door. 

                                JULIAN (CONT'D)
                      Huh! What the fuck?! You want to fucking
                      tell me where I can go now? Huh?

                                LIQUOR STORE GUY
                          (whimpering)
                      No.

                                JULIAN
                      All I wanted was fucking pack of smokes,
                      dude! Fucking asshole.

            Julian gets in his car and peels out.

            INT. MALL - DAY

            The mall is decorated for Christmas. Christmas Muzak plays in
            the background. This is a thrill ride simulator kiosk. A big
            red box on hydraulics is violently shifting around. The
            operator is reading a magazine, answering the questions of
            two MALLRAT GIRLS, mid-teens, plastic.

                                MALLRAT GIRL #1
                      How much is it?

                                OPERATOR
                      Five Dollars.

                                MALLRAT GIRL #1
                      What kind of ride is it?

                                OPERATOR
                      It's a roller coaster. It's wooden.

                                MALLRAT GIRL #2
                      Is it fun?

                                OPERATOR
                          (cardboard)
                      Yeah, it's awesome.

                                MALLRAT GIRL #1
                      Does it go upside down?

            All three turn to look at the machine, shaking back and
            forth.

                                OPERATOR
                      No.

                                MALLRAT GIRL #2
                      Does it feel real?

            One of the girls notices a male mallrat down the hall. She
            goes after him, calling his name.

                                MALLRAT GIRL #1
                      Corey! Corey!

            The other girl follows quickly. The operator watches them go,
            turns back to his magazine. The ride comes to an end, the box
            rests. He undoes various latches to let out the riders; a man
            in his late fifties and Josh.

                                OPERATOR
                      Welcome back folks, how was your trip?

            A beat.

                                OPERATOR (CONT'D)
                      Please be sure to retrieve your
                      belongings before exiting the ride. Thank
                      you for riding the Cobra XT.

                                JOSH
                      Thanks.

                                OPERATOR
                      Uh huh.

            INT. LINGERIE STORE - MOMENTS LATER

            This is a Victoria's Secret. An INCREDIBLY HOT WOMAN, early
            thirties, is helping Josh pick out bras and underwear for
            Mary.

                                INCREDIBLY HOT WOMAN
                      ...and what this is going to do, with
                      this piece here, and feel that...

            She offers Josh a feel of the bra. He pinches the bra
            quickly.

                                JOSH
                      Hmm.

                                INCREDIBLY HOT WOMAN
                      Isn't that nice? And so that's going to
                      give a little bit of a lift. 

                                JOSH
                      Right.

            INT. MALL - MOMENTS LATER

            Josh is leaving the lingerie store with a bag. He is taken
            with all the Christmas decorations and music. He inhales it,
            smiles to himself.

            EXT. DAYCARE CENTER - AFTERNOON

            Josh shows up at the daycare with flowers. There is snow on
            the ground. Miss Claire is giving the children back to their
            parents. Some of the kids recognize Josh, yell his name, give
            him hugs, etc.

                                JOSH
                      Hi Miss Claire. How was your
                      Thanksgiving?

                                MISS CLAIRE
                      Well. It was fine Josh, thank you. I am,
                      I'm pretty... Well... Austin, honey! We
                      don't shove, sweetie, we love! I've been
                      better.

                                JOSH
                      Oh, I'm sorry to hear that. Is uh, is
                      Mary here or...

                                MISS CLAIRE
                      No, Mary is certainly not here, thank
                      heavens.

                                JOSH
                      Sorry?

                                MISS CLAIRE
                      Well, after this morning, I would not
                      expect to find Mary here again. These are
                      children! Children! They ALWAYS learn!
                      And if you think, well --

                                JOSH
                      I'm sorry, I'm not really sure what
                      you're talking about.

                                MISS CLAIRE
                      No?

                                JOSH
                      No. 

                                MISS CLAIRE
                      Well, your Mary, whatever she is to you,
                      decided to get herself fired this
                      morning.

                                JOSH
                      Fired? 

                                MISS CLAIRE
                      You bet fired. Absolutely! She shows up
                      here, obviously drunk, smelling like a,
                      a, like a tavern and an ashtray, and
                      these kids watch everything! Do you think
                      they missed that? They're children for
                      the love of Mike, do you think they
                      missed that?

                                JOSH
                      No, I, I don't... Drunk? She was drunk?
                      Are you sure?

                                MISS CLAIRE
                      Well, I didn't give her a drunk test or
                      whatever they do, but I didn't need to!
                      That girl shows up here, dressed like
                      Madonna, or, or Britney Spears, with the
                      makeup and the swaggering! And look at
                      our flagpole! It was morning recess! We
                      all saw it! Look at that!

            Across the parking lot, Mary's car is moderately wrecked
            (undrivable) up against the tilted flagpole. Some janitors
            are assessing the situation.

                                JOSH
                      Mary did that? Was she, she crashed
                      there?

                                MISS CLAIRE
                      I'll say! I always knew that girl was
                      dangerous, but this? This! What will I
                      tell the parents? 'Oh, I'm sure awful
                      sorry Mr. and Mrs. Kinderman, but Jimmy's
                      teacher wrapped her honda around our
                      flagpole this morning in front of your
                      son and his classmates.
                      But gee, look at this lovely Paper Marche
                      Christmas Tree we made during arts and
                      crafts!' No!

                                JOSH
                      Is she alright? Where is she now?

                                MISS CLAIRE
                      Well, she's not hurt if that's what you
                      mean, but alright? Do you call this
                      alright? I would NOT say alright! I don't
                      know where she is, and frankly she better
                      not be here, ever again! Mackenzie!
                      Kristy! We do not kiss one another! Hey!
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